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Mohatu's Reign: Chapter4: Page61

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Chapter 4 Page 61

I might be uploading a lot in the next couple of days, as you know I get bored with lengthy dialogue and try to pump them out of the way as quickly as possible XD

Dahlia got Ahadi feeling a bit guilty here. And she IS right... Even though his father was an ass, there was no need for his mother to suffer. And even though the pride thought he had run away, there was no need for them to suffer as well.

A few things to point out.

Ahadi's father will NOT return. he's dead. simple as that.

Dahlia will be Sarabi's mom! I thought this was clear, but I still have a few people saying "zira's mom!" in posts. Dahlia is not Zira's mother. Zira's mother has a set design as she was the 1st place winner of my character contest.

Dahlia is not a bitch! As much as she is a flirt, and as much as you might dislike her for it, she is really a nice lioness and this will become more apparent. She isn't blind to what Ahadi is feeling either. She's trying to get him to talk about his past, open up and feel emotions... Something Uru never tried to do. And Dahlia is right... Even though his mother wasn't strong enough to stand up for Ahadi, she was not a bad mother. She was just a very battered soul. In a way, she probably thought Ahadi might have a better life away from the pride. You guys seriously need to cool your jets with her. Anyone who knows Ahadi and Uru's story knows that it is FACT that Uru and Ahadi get together in the end. So chill! Dahlia is NOT going to steal Ahadi. And as Uru has never shown interest in Ahadi yet, she isn't really stealing him anyway.

don't critique my comic pages!


How many times do I have to say this... This is not my best work. This work is for fun, not for my professional portfolio. I do not mind spelling error corrections, or color inconsistencies such as eyes. But please don't talk to me about anatomy, layout, background, emotions, anything.

Get under my skin enough and I will block you. I do get some commenters that seem to like to attempt to push buttons in small ways. I've already blocked one person for this. I'll do it again. This comic is meant to be for my amusement and fun. I love that you guys love it as well, but seriously... I do not mind blocking people who annoy me. One less viewer isn't going to horribly bother me. As I have nothing to really gain from this comic, I also have nothing to loose.... Be respectful with me.

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GothamLioness1's avatar

I agree with everything here... these comments have gotten pretty toxic